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Friday, January 21, 2011

part1 (don't forget to listen to the creepy music when reading!)

Shakes
Claw-
The beginning..

page1
Prologue

“Yellow...Yellowbur..Yellowburn..huh” The yellow tom heaved
FATHER!” Yellowburn cried out

There's never been a cat like you before.” birdjay mewed and leaned up against Yellowburn . Yellowburn smiled.
The moon was out it lit up the sky,They were sitting on a hill over looking a wide forest .
Yellow and black belts together breathing slowly.
Its been a whole year since my father died. I hope he has a good hunt..” Yellowburn a rose and padded down the hill, head down.
*You said, I had powers to awaken and only I can see you again,but I never could find what you wanted me to find....huhh birdjay is all I have and she doesn't want a clan.
You wanted a clan and I want to be with you..
She wants a family and I want..I want..To be free.*

FREEDUM!” Yellowburn yald and moon light burned down on him.
A cats shape appeared.

You will pass it on but Intel then I am your nightmare!” It screeched and Yellowburns heart pounded.

wake up yellowburn its time to go..” a voice mewed
home.?” yellowburn asked.
NO NEVER YOU WILL BE GOING NOWERE HAHA!” another evil voice mewed.

blAAAAAAAAH!!!!!” Yellowstar awoke and walked toward the nursery were clawkit slept peacefully.
DO IT!DO IT!” A hash voice screeched
save your clan...” It hissed.
I'm sorry clawkit..I don't want to but its for the clans sack.” Yellowstar but his paw down on clawkits,a tier fell from his muzzle onto clawkits head and his hand started to glow..
clock it...” The voice of the beast whispered in clawkits ear and yellowstar padded out to sleep,sleep the very first night he ever slept...

3 comments:

  1. (i was laughfing when i read this listening to yellowstars theme song.)

    "clock it...clock it..."

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  2. I was saying to whisper the other day about how I wanted to make the time rock creepy but everytime i said clawkit it sounded like clock it soo i disided to make the time rock ceep calling him clock it ensted. Ya.. SOooo I'm thinking off calling him that for now..
    I guess thats just how the time rock rolls...
    (thats the unoun thing the time rock,I'm going to make it a cat soon.)

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